CONSUMING RAGE POEM

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By jimmythejock

GRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Go on say it say the words that are inside you struggling to get out.

Fight the urge,that tells you feelings will be hurt.

Blurt it out before it consumes you in anger and hatred,

Stop beating about the bush just speak.

Im ready for your angry words all set to face your wrath,

No matter what you have to say my darling i will always love you.

Thats it thats what fueled your anger,

Im sorry my darling from now on I will always put the toilet seat down....

Had you going there lol didnt I .....jimmy

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NightFlower Level 4 Commenter 5 years ago

Oh, now you know you are wrong for that jimmy. I was all set for this beautiful and profound ending (lol) but again you got made me burst.

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jimmythejock Hub Author 5 years ago

lol i do love to tease nightflower so very much.....jimmy

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jimmythejock Hub Author 5 years ago

for fun i entered this into poetry.com....jimmy

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Davinne 5 years ago

Cute yes u did have me going for a moment there....lol

Iðunn 5 years ago

lol!

Ralph 5 years ago

Ha!

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Chuck Level 4 Commenter 5 years ago

Enjoyed the poem. Congratulations on making the semi-finals and good luck with the finals.

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jimmythejock Hub Author 5 years ago

thanks chuck its probably a no hoper but fun to see how it does lol .....jimmy

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